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Sticks and Stones


Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will slowly kill me

Hurricanes will break my home,
But storms will never kill me

Death is not an experience,
we can wait for in life*

Guns will be the death of me,
If I pull the trigger

Cuts from Knives will make me bleed,
But bandages will heal them

Emotions though can cut deeper,
Hearts will never heal. 

Bombs will shatter my city,
love will shatter life 

Hate will destroy this world,
Friends the only shelter **

The world will be left broken, 
My words will describe it

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This first poem is to the idiots- kidding extremely nice people who forced me to join.
*XMajutsu-shiX also, they wrote the first and fourth verse
* Death is not a life experience, it's a death experience
**Friends meaning friends and family, sometimes you have to sacrifice some words in poems to keep the rhythm

Ok... so yes... it is slightly strange that a boy is writing... stuff... like this... that doesn't mean I am a homosexual. Look people... there are, believe it or not, a few sensitive boys in this world.
Also I know this is a sad poem but... eh..
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Anime-Freak345 Feb 7, 2014
I'm literally speechless. This is beautiful.
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SorcererWithAPen Feb 11, 2014  Student Artist
thanks!
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:iconkupkate95:
Dude. HOW?? You are AMAZING!!!
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:iconcatleorien:
catleorien Sep 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Beautiful
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:iconsorcererwithapen:
SorcererWithAPen Sep 21, 2013  Student Artist
Thankyou! 
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xxdelineatemeemoxx Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
The one about sticks and stones isn't true.... The names I get called, and I get called them all, so I started believing that no one would ever fall in love with me. That I would be alone forever so I emptied myself so I would feel nothing at all. DONT TELL ME THAT HURTS LESS THAN A BROKEN BONE!
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Wolfgisella Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
-> Your comment sounds a lot like that poem "To This Day" By: Shane Koyczan. I love that poem. -_-
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xxdelineatemeemoxx Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Well... These things do rub off on me...
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SorcererWithAPen Sep 19, 2013  Student Artist
which is why I wrote words will slowly kill me... isn't dying slowly and painfully worse than a quick death -,-
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:iconxenophonxena:
awww I wish all boys were so romantic and poetic... well poetic at lest! awesome!
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