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Just Say It To My Face


Just tell me- Just say it to my face
Have I done something wrong?
We haven't talked for so long

Please listen:
Even a hello or a hi
I'm too used to goodbye

Now, Come here:
Is It because of the clothes that I wear?
Or the way I do my hair?

And look at me :
Look me in the eye
So I'm sure it's not a lie

Then tell me:
Don't text me, don't call me, don't write me a song
I just really want to know....if I've done something wrong

Just tell me- Just say it to my face
Please listen,
Now come here, 
And look at me, 
Then tell me,
Have I done something wrong?
We all make mistakes
We haven't talked for so long
We all have those days.

Just tell me- Just say it to my face

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The bathroom can be great place for inspiration ;>.
I was doing requests and and I told *XMajutsu-shiX to give me a line to write a poem about... so the line they gave me was:
Just tell me- Just say it to my face.
This is what they said:

Have you ever had a feeling that your friend is...acting differently? Sure they are not saying stupid stuff to your face, maybe that would be better...they are not saying anything and you have this tornado brewing up inside of you which makes you want to vomit- you know something is wrong. What do you do?
Thankfully I've never felt that way since I'm a very upfront person (as is my twin) So bewaaare!

And this popped up! Though they did give me a few ideas this nearly ate my brain.
I don't think you needed the last bit of information but....
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SHADOW-54911 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
so...so...(weeps) BUTIFUL!!!


lol
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AnitaKrizzan Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013
Lovely
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lkay557 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Student Writer
this is soo great. i should try this with my friends that write a lot. 
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TypoPocky Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist
*-* this is absolutely amazing :la:
ima gonna go back to writing my terrible essay now TT_TT
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SorcererWithAPen Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Student Artist
Thanks very much! Good luck on your essay!
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chinoise56 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Brilliant

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SorcererWithAPen Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Student Artist
thanks!
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FreeFallHero Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Now scroll back up and read it in the voice that Eminem has in "Kim".
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SorcererWithAPen Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Student Artist
I haven't heard that one! But have you heard Bully? That's awesome!
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tontodrop Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
I just love this! You'te extremely talented :3
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