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Assassin


I know who you are, walking alone
With that look in your eye, 
And your own secret throne,
The secrets you hide,

You know that I know.

Temptation, frustration,
Don't know your destination,
Sensation, elation,
Disgust of Assassination

I know why you're you, out in the dark,
With that look in your eye,
That electric spark,
That past that you hide,

It's no secret anymore.

Betrayed, dismayed,
Your not at all cliched,
Double blade, a maid,
Made to assassinate

I know your past, why you hide away,
The family and friends you lost,
The price you had to pay,
It's not really your fault,

Your not that alone.

Hiding, deriding,
You take a long time deciding,
Your striding, colliding
Your own world your dividing

I know you begged, when you were young,
In streets at morn, dusk and dawn,
To feed yourself, I know that it stung,
Scars in your heart,

Though of course you won't 

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I'm tired... this is for Xmajutsu-shix's character Lava... :>






An assassin is more than just an assassin :>
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charminbluebell Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOW! You know, that was avery awesome poem! Looks like you have a talent! Good job on it! Mistakes? Who cares! It was as good as it was! No punctuation errors can ever change that! 
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Nightreign123 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Student Writer
Nice rhythm. I only wish I were that good at writing poems with a decent rhythm. :/

Although I would like to point out the following mistakes:
- Your not at all cliched -> You're not at all cliched
- Your not that alone. -> You're not that alone
Your own world your dividing -> Your own world you're dividing
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SorcererWithAPen Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student Artist
I always make that mistake! Hah... thanks, and everyone can write a poem- you just need inspiration
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Nightreign123 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student Writer
I agree, but just writing a poem has no real value or meaning. Being able to write meaningful poems; that's the art.
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naheim Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Jajajjaja you find me
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Taiwann15 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
cool
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SorcererWithAPen Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Student Artist
Thanks
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Taiwann15 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Your welcome ^^
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Ikoter Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Writer
Nice. This just told a story.
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SorcererWithAPen Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Artist
I was hoping it did since its based on a character !
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